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Chetan

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Wednesday, March 29, 2006 in
It was one of the very important days in his life. Chetan had been waiting for this day for a long while. As the day neared, he found himself striking off days on the calendar in his room. As he looked around his room, he saw all those things he had so proudly owned till now. He had a long way to go ahead, but still. There was no more room for the past. It was time.
His parents had carefully looked into the nitty-gritty of the party details. A banquet hall in one of the most posh hotels in the city was booked and even the decor and food was selected according to his choice.
They made sure that Chetan would not have anything to worry about that evening. They wanted everything to be perfect.
It was already 6 pm. Chetan went into the shower and rubbed himself squeaky clean. As he descended the stairs of the hotel, he looked absolutely stunning in his navy suit ,a light blue shirt and a shade darker blue tie and shiny twin tone shoes.

The party lasted only for 2 hours, but Chetan's parents decided it was a triumph afterall. The children ate too much of the Mickey Mouse cake and puked all over the Persian rug, they fought over the toys and cried themselves hoarse when their balloons burst.
Despite all this
Chetan tried his best to be a perfect host, handling himself with great dignity and aplomb. What more could you expect from a child on his 3rd birthday party ?

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15 Comments


hehehee...
testimony to your comment in my blog!!!
lol!!


hmm.... story-la twist kudukkareengalo!! gud one...


meow..... story first para ok and nice 'n interesting...... ur attempt at a twist there is understandable, but 2nd para innum crisp ah pucca va irunthirukkalam..... in the 1st line o f the 2nd para itself u have spelt out the twist..... neway Nice story :)

@ vani - i am yet to see ur comment in my blogsite


hooooooo, twist kudukreengala twistuuu! superappu! good post..
btw, first time here..

Anonymous says:

3rd b'dayaaa?...engaeoo idikithey..


ha ha..nice read da


wow.. good narration. just mind blowing narration. you certainly need to find a good publisher


3 vayasula "waiting for this day for a long while" and "striking off days on the calendar in his room" ellam konjam nambara madhiri illiye


Vani,
hehehe, heights of joblessness, Lol

Kuttichuvaru,
Adada, thanks :o)


RS,
as a matter of fact, idhu fiction illa, i really witnessed this party. I was taken to the party saying that its a big boy's budday... paartha big boy was turning 3


Ambi, welcome here! :o)

Ashok, ditto reply as tht to RS

Sophie,
thanks


Known Stranger,
Apdiya?? ennalaye namba mudila. I wrote this under 10 mins.

Aravind,
I've known little kids who wait for their buddays and some can count days on the calender too... kids u see.. they r getting so much smarter!


jus can't understand parents, can ya? :)

ps.
I've flown four times, all before the age of 3.. appo poi enna prayojanam? :( Airhostess-a sight adikka mudiyuma? illa frds kitta thaan peela vida mudiyuma?


The act or process of amassing or increasing extravagant praise.


Harish,
true true!

Netcraze,
but, what's the use for a 3 year old?

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