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The Beach

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Monday, March 06, 2006 in
Vinay was one guy who was never able to look at a girl and speak a few coherent words. He was brought up that way, his life void of girls. His interests were nothing more than Sports and his dear friends. All through the day he used to roam around the city on his bike. Neither Vinay nor his friends could ever imagine that one day he would fall in love. But the inevitable happened.
Sunanda was the daughter of Vinay's father's really close friend. She had grown up watching him. Sunanda was the most trustworthy person her friends could ever come across. Never did she believe that she would be liked by any boy despite several proposals that she dutifully declined. Vinay always held a special place in her heart. But then, she never had the guts to ask him. Now was her chance.
She stood at the beach, her long wavy hair being blown in all directions by the salty wind. She had checked her mobile's display screen for 2 things umpteen times in the last few minutes; a call from Vinay and secondly the time. He was late already. She was getting nervous. It was his first ever moment with a girl alone. She wanted him to be comfortable around her. Ah! Finally, he appeared like a speck at the bend around the corner. Her heart started racing. Her eyes followed him on his bike. He had crossed the place where she was standing. Damn all those instructions that she gave him about where she'd be standin! He parked his bike a few yards away and marched his last few steps to a relationship where he lost his single title. He still didn't have the guts to look up at her. He dragged the last few steps with his head bent. He knew it was now or never. He looked up and saw the girl he had been silently admiring all his life. She hadn't changed a bit.
Do I deserve her? Will she be happy with me? Does she like me at all? All these questions were answered by those longing eyes and that smile on her lips.

P.s: Long time since a romantic post, that's why !

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24 Comments


hey ramya..

gudone.

i guess it was ur own " day" wid names changed ;)

cheers!! :))


Sridhar, not necessary that it has to be My day! it could also be someone else whom I know right??


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Approm, Approm....
Ennaachu :-D


Kartik,
I've mailed you.

Vinesh,
Enna apram? Avlo thaan and they lived happily ever after.


sweet story :)


sry 4 my wrong guess


12B padam mathiri irukku!


Aravind, Thankoo!

Sridhar, Purinjinda seri.

Sheks, 12-B padam ah? Seriya thaan padichiya? Romba yosika koodadhu kadhai pathi.


hmm...

avan sonnana illiyaaa... siripaa parthu yemaarndarakoodadhu maaa!!!...


nice naration.. Love propose pannum poodhu irukara thrill irukae!! adhaa sonna puriyaadhu...


imho , the previous display image looks better.
the beach! reminds me of a beautful movie and also the times at goa. oh!


ramya these few lines expressed multiple human emotions

"She stood at the beach, her long wavy hair being blown in all directions by the salty wind."

-- extremum of it.

that was truely a romantic one.


nice writing style n description of the story.
But why people are having such inertia which vinay was having, Hey still the story is not c ompleted wat happened after that...........


AAha, oho, aahaahaa!
Hey, don't complete the story (my 2 cents worth!)...it has more impact this way!

(God, someday I've to write some romantic story too! ;) *Shakes her head and makes up her mind*)


Neighbour, personal experience pesudhu polarku.

Sujith, this one goes with the black n white theme.


Logic, thankoo :o))

Vikas, the rest is for you to imagine.

Vani, So when are we seein a romantic post from ya??


//Purinjinda seri.

wot it means ??
i dunno tamil...

Anonymous says:

Coolay!

This place is hottin' up!


Sridhar, it means good that you understood.

Amit, oh really???


one smile and the expression in her eyes..
i have never experienced it...but i believe that it must be the bigger than even millions of dollars of happiness...


wow... what an romantic post.


*checks the dictionary if "Somethings" meant "Mills" and "Nothings" meant "Boon"* :)


Harish, Maybe, enakkum theriyadhu!

Known Stranger, oh really??

harish, and what did the dictionary say??


curses: lol!!! :)

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