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Lost

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Wednesday, January 18, 2006 in ,
She felt the hands slipping away,
She struggled to hold on,
Time was not a friend this way,
She tried it all, but in vain.

He was longing to see her,
Monochromatic was his life, until she came.
The distance was not helping either,
Times can be so unpredictable like water droplets on a window pane.

State of the art technology,
Wireless communication,
Slick gadgets, nothing can ever compensate
For the times spent in recollecting the memories with a loved one.

He was gone,
She was lost and broken,
The search has just begun,
Lots to discover, boundaries to cross, feelings sunken.

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19 Comments


kuch to hua hai...kuch ho gaya hai....


Elation because of results and the otherwise because of this ? Life is so cruel. Right Ramya ?

Hope u are ok now ?


Nice poem though. I like the analogy of unpredictability to the water droplets on window pane...
Looks more like the inspiration came while u were recollecting memories by the window ;o))))


sweet poem!
there are always ups n downs, it all depends who comes on the top in the end :)


State of the art technology,
Wireless communication,
Slick gadgets, nothing can ever compensate
For the times spent in recollecting the memories with a loved one


how true. how very true.gosh...am going wistful.


@Harish: Kuch nahi hua hai..

@Somu: No elation n all.. life is going on with more speed now. And glad that u liked it.


@Sonu: Thanks!

@Arun: It could be perceived in a lot of ways actually.

@Sujith: hmmmm.. out of your reverie?


whose love story is this??


I have tagged you. I am really sorry. Had to tag 6 ppl and i really dunno a lot of people in here.


i smel something is happening...

Anonymous says:

Good recollections!


@Sheks: Nobody in particular, I've been trying to write romantic stuff.

@Sujith: Tag's ready!


@Sophia: Nothing is brewing here... stop sniffing!

@Amit: Recollections?? Whose?


State of the art technology,
Wireless communication,
Slick gadgets, nothing can ever compensate
For the times spent in recollecting the memories with a loved one.


True...too true...


@Neha: :o)


beautiful...

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