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The Change !

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Tuesday, January 03, 2006 in
Its been a long time since I tried my hand at romantic fiction after THIS. So here goes something out of my attic.

"Love is something that can happen to men and women who know each other" When she read the quote, she found it really amusing. The thought of falling in love with a person she knew all her life, seemed farce to her. Her brain started rolling out names of people who were possible prospects. Just then her mobile beeped.

He was leaving to Kodai with his friends the very same day and had thought of messaging her before he left. So he pulled out his mobile and messaged her 4 little words "leaving now, bye bye". Message delivered. He was too pragmatic to consider the notion of falling in love.
But both of them didn't realize that, this was the starting point to the change their lives were about to undergo. She messaged back.

All his friends were in several stages of sleep. He wasn't able to sleep, thanks to his nocturnal habits. He messaged her again from the bus. She wasn't like before today.
There was a major power-cut in her locality and she couldn't sleep either. Just then her mobile beeped again.

The messages kept pouring in. All the emotions within them started pouring out. Both of them thought they knew each other really well, but everything proved wrong that night. Neither of them were bothered about their phone balances being screwed. The roaming charges for him and the postpaid non-free SMS pack for her.

Topics untouched were being spoken. He found a new person in her. She felt like talking her mind out to him. Thanks to all the communication gap between them which was being bridged now. She was battling against herself whether to ask him or not. But by the time she decided not to, her fingers had already reacted faster than her mind. The message was sent.

"I've always liked u, I tout u didn't like me" He knew no joys like this, when he read that msg from her. He replied... "Ofc not, I've had a crush on you for so long, I tout u didn't like me" She was too shocked to beleive her eyes when she saw his reply.

The 4 hour messaging session that night, had brought in a new dimension to their lives. A change in which both of them are living today. A change that neither thought would ever happen to them.

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26 Comments


Hey Ramya
Good and neat one...edhu enna kadhaya ellati unmai sambhavama?? lol
Sriram


Hmm.. another sriram's already here? Oh well.. nice one ;).. and thanks for dropping by my place. welcome anytime :)


aha....nalla thaan irukku...
ithukku thaan ivanga ellam SMS OC la vara card vangaraangala??hmmmm...naan oru pozhakka teriyaadha janmam :-(


"romantic fiction" , my elbow! ahh...cmmon ramya! this is a true story, isnt it? say yes or dnt reply.


@Sriram1: Danku! Adhaan 1st line liye romantic fiction nnu poturkene

@Sriram2: Thanks! Sure!


@Harish: Nandri, free sms idhukaaga kooda irukalaam.!

@Vee-jay: Thanks! :o)


@Sujith: I'm not replying.! Tum bhi naa? ;-)

Anonymous says:

Nice one,
Reminds me of one another forward i received in the mail about unsaid love between people.

Nodoubt bound to be on the forwards list soon...


Hey there ,
Nice story !! Also felt like a good base for a Hindi movie. :)

Can I blog roll you ?

Vidya


hehe i was expecting a twist in the end just like the another one you wrote on mobile :)

neway....... writing romantic story / poem on blog is always gonna be a risk.....being confronted with questions like "hey ithu unmaithanae", "yaarupa athu", "whoz the hero" etc., ithukku thaan naan safe ah spoof / kadis elutharen.... even if i write truth in it nobody wud find out ;)

me too tempted to ask the same question to u ramya (thappa eduthukathe little sis :D) can we expect more episodes of this "fiction" (as you call it)


@Lapstre: Welcome here and thanks!

@Vidya: Welcome here and thanks and sure u can!

@R.S: Thanks! Adhukku thaan naa statuatory warning poturken. Adha yaarum padikara madiri therila. More episodes kku idhu enna neyar viruppam aa?

Anonymous says:

how about his phone getting stolen in the train after she replied to his first msg and from then on the conversation was with someone else, only later to find out the truth with embarrasment when she quickly hugs him when he returns..

that would have been some ending, aint it?

anyway, I liked yours, i was hoping for something to happen in the end.. padam interval vutta maathiri aiduchu. continue exploring ur fictional writing..


hehe prasad story nalla irukku.... kandal naal mudhal maathiri hero-heroine fights from chinna age, intha mathiri oru travel time la heroine chumma sms panra to the hero for a info, but the hero's mobile gets missed and reaches some other guy who responds to her sms's....hero pathi thappa ninaichittu irukkara heroine, ivanukkula ipadi oru nalla pulla irukkana ninaichu falls in love for him........ (meow sona mathiri propose thru sms mattum nadakkale).. she falls in love but keeps quiet about it..... ithai pathi ethuvume theriyaatha hero still frowns and fights with the heroine...but heroine who had fallen for the hero keeps on loving....... climax la oru railway station la kootitu vanthu serthu vaikkarom rendu peraiyum...


Good One...Look Real to me..I do not see any fiction...

Anonymous says:

nice one. writing a romance story is one of my 43things.

aana adhukku innum idea kedaikkalai.


waah!
dreamy!! :o)
and rsubras,
blog-la endha kadhai ezhudinalum people'll ask if it's true, if happened to you, etc. cannot do anything about it!! sigh!!


@vani you can do something about it...climax la oru unbelievable stuff add pannunga.... eppadina heroine phone ah cut pannitu thannoda flight la eri switzerland ku coffee sappida pona....... hero disappointment la keezhe football ongi kick panna athu mela poitu iruntha plane ah adichathu... pilot jannalai thiranthu ethuna ketta vaarthai la thittinaaru... ippadi ethuna fancy things oda mudicheenga vachikonga..nobody wud ever ask hey is this story true ;)


does it happen so ? I enjoyed your fiction. Do you know i had a friend, where we both lived a life in mobile but hardly could speak any subject except hi and how you in eyes. We decieded the realtion to live only in mobile. very funny right.


@Prasad: hmph! So much for my story!

@Rags: Only good ppl can see the truth! Lol !

@Ammu: Thanks.. sure will come sometime soon.


this explains what dirty tricks SMS plays.thank god i dont hav a mobile. :(


@Balaji: Thanks :o)

@Vani: Right vani, ppl always assume the posts to be somehow related to u. Sad!

@Known Stranger: A story in itself!


@sheks: Oww.. missed ur comment in a second.


sooperaa irukku :)


good one!!!! but somehow dont think it can happen for real :)


@Vijay: Danku :o)

@Neha: Thanks, that's why its a story!!!


Good 1 ramya...first time here..
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