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The Angel God sent

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Sunday, August 27, 2006 in
Manasa and Meghana aged 6 and 2 respectively, were the apple of their father's eyes. Bringing up the girls alone was a difficult task indeed for Mahesh. His wife passed away the moment Meghana came into this world. She was a replica of her mother with the same big fish like eyes and a dimple on the left cheek. Little Meghu always reminded Mahesh of his wife. He showered all the love in the world on his little girls. He didn't want them to feel the absence of their mother. But, Manasa was the mother's darling. She felt empty and always believed that she lost her mother because of her little sister. She used to take sadistic pleasure in pinching Meghana and seeing her cry. She wanted to be the centre of attention. But she found her father spending more time with her little sister and felt as if he was ignoring her. Manasa secluded herself from the two and spoke very less.
One fine morning, Mahesh saw Manasa steathily walk upto Meghana's room. Suspecting his elder one's actions, he followed her and saw her poke Meghana with a sharp pencil. The little one immediately shook out of its stupor and started wailing. Mahesh stopped Manasa in her tracks and slapped her for her insensitive behavior towards the child.
"I demand an explanation from you Manasa and I want it right now. " said Mahesh in a firm authoritative tone.
Manasa vented all her built-in fury. She screamed pointing at the wailing child "She sent Mummy to God, she killed my Mummy and ever since she came you have started hating me. You didn't congratulate me for coming first in class, you didn't come for my school anniversary program, you didn't....." and she burst into tears.
Mahesh immediately understood the girl's insecurity and kneeled down in front of her. Cupping her cherubic face in his hands, Mahesh said- "You are always special to me Manu, my eldest sweetheart. Its not that I don't love you, your sister needs my attention right now. I thought my Manu has become big enough to manage on her own. Both of your are like my 2 eyes, I can never say that I like only my left eye. You had your mother's love for 4 years of your life, your sister is deprived of that too. But she is so lucky to have a lovely big sister like you. Don't you have to make her feel special?"
At that very moment, Meghana climbed down her crib and tugged Manu's frock and in her baby language said "mama.. maaa"
Meghana picked up her little sister wiped her tears and said -" I'm sorry for everything Meghani, I'll be your mama from now, you're the angel God sent instead of Mama"
Mahesh looked at his 2 girls and a small tear escaped his eyes.

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21 Comments


HEy, ramz!!!! Awesome post di!!!! VEry simple matter, but the way u have pictured the whoel thing was amazing... Hi5!!!!


yeaa ramya excellent narration :)

senti stories elutharathula nee kalakkurae

Cute


and a tear jus escaped my eyes too :')


know what?Ur story reminds me of my childhood. My mom says that i tried to pull my just-born bro from his bed (i was 2 year old then) bcoz of jealousy.
Kalakeeta po!!!!


ramya - amazing stuff ramya..beautiful narration - I had seen this with one of my neice ( not direct - daughter of my cousin-hating her brother) very well narrated

Hey ramya - to your caliber - i love to read more eloquent style of themes still more stronger than a simple narration.

a more narration of the elder daughter struggling to understand the complexity of human mind would make it more touchy


very good story! loved it...
the narrtion was too good... i could see it happening b4 my eyes! :)


Preethi,
*hi5's back*
Thanks girl!

RS,
Oh! Thanks! :)

Kiki,
Awww !

Harish,
My stories always seem to take someone or the other back to their childhood! :D

KS,
I would try that too, but I like to keep my posts short! This is one of the longest infact!

Aravind,
Am glad! Thanks :)

Anonymous says:

Hey,I don't think I've ever commented before..but I've always enjoyed your little stories...I love relationship stories..and you're a specialist at them!Write on!

BTW,what you doing exactly?Engineering?Lit?

Anonymous says:

Oh,and the question came after I read your post on math..just now went and read the comments..so you're another one of those bright e people eh?have fun!


awww.. how sweet! u have an excellent style of narration! :) keep em coming!


hamsini,
thanks a lot and welcome here!
Oh yes, I'm unfortunately into the engineering stream. Doing I.T

Soulasylum,
sure, thanks :)


usually happens when i spend more time with my youngest kid. finally had to get them all together one day and explain how the youngest need more attention... beautifully potrayed :)


simple yet powerful one ramya.. good 1..

I have seen so many situations like these in different families...unfortunately not all parent handles this well ...


long time no see gal..howz u...


Smiley,
that was the thought that triggered this post! Thanks :)

Dakaltiz,
Well Mahesh seems to have handled it pretty well! Thanks

Sophie,
Am good ! How're u?


Thanks for dropping by.. :-)
Wow..u too(incl me :D) write well and would love to know in how many breaks did u write that ?


nice one there ramya..keep writing

Anonymous says:

Nice one! I was just wondering where do you get the inspiration to write on such intense topics from...

I mean most college student wouldnt give a fuck about family sentiments etc. You earlier post about a physically challenged kid also was on similar theme... You have a knack to pick such less trodden subjects for your posts...:)

Best of luck!


Aravind,
Ho ho! Well yes!

Shiv,
Thanks :)

Sagaro
Well coming from a budding author, quite something to mull upon, thanks :)

Anonymous says:

hey listen, lets go easy on that budding author big... lol


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