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Anandita

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Friday, August 11, 2006 in
From atop the bed, little Anandita asked her mother "Amma, do I really have to go?"
"Anu, it'll be great, trust me! You'll love your new school" said her mother as she parted her little one's hair and tied a ponytail on either side.
As she picked up the crisply ironed new grey and black pinafore and matching grey sock, Anandita remarked again, "Amma, will you come to pick me up in the evening?"
"Sure darling, I'll be there at the gates at 2 sharp" said the mother quickly stuffing chutney coated idlis into the constantly talking mouth.
With her water bottle sling on one side and a new bag hoisted firmly on her shoulders, Anandita said her prayers and before she could open her eyes, her father was carrying her to the car.
At the school gates, Anandita couldn't contain her tears.
"Big girls don't cry" reminded her mother.
Pulling her crutch together, little Anandita walked through the gates to her "School for the Disabled"


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21 Comments


Wow... Nice one Ramya... And did u say u wrote it in a jiffy ?


nicely narrated one....... :)

ending, from the beginning i thought u are gonna end with some twist...i thought u wud say anandita is a principal or something like that.... ending blunt ah irunthuchu.... wat u r trying to tell finally ne theriyata pola irunthuchu

otherwise a good one


how long did u plan on this one? lets know the truth.
that was by far the best twist i have read.
only one flaw 'walked to the porch and into the car.'
rephrase it and you have got a master piece......


heart-touching, but does it qualify of being a parable?


naan ending expect pannitten :-)


wonderful bost! :) sad indeed


Somu,
You know the span of time I took to write this one ! :p

RS,
Its just a narration, no story. I don't like affixing standard ending. Perceive it the way u like it! :)

Kausik,
I've made it clear now. I meant being carried to the car


Rahul,
Not essentially a parable ! Just a child's insecurity narrated !

Kuttichuvaru,
Enna ippolam thinking out of the box thaan polarku !

Kiki,
Thanks! :)


Super Ramz!!!! Sad ending ah irundhalum, the pain in such children has been beautifully narrated.. soul stirring!!!


now thats a master piece :)


on a second reading this looks better esp with the change made as suggesetd by kausik

even then this gives a oh-i-read-similar-kinda-stories-somewhere feeling :D


Prithz,
Thanks :)

Kausik,
Thanks for pointing that out! :)

RS,
Its just a vision. Never read it expecting a twist at the end! Spoils the whole joy of reading!


so do i get a treat for pointing out?


another good one from u... keep it up :)

Anonymous says:

That was painfully... good.


kausik,
Innum ethana peru kelambirkeenga ipdi?

Aravind,
Thanks :)

Sagaro,
Thanks and welcome !


good one...
"she walked to the car was OK..."
her father "carried" gives away the twist...may be a small girl...
nice ending.


Felt like the twist in the end, didn't live up to the build up...

anyways... u r out of the writer's block....


hey super.. nice narration!! good work :) n commenting here for the 1st time... thou i've ben reading ur posts for long time now!! :)


Ramanujam,
It wasn't meant to be a twist ! You just think its a little girl all along. She just happens to be differently-abled

Balaji,
Thanks :)

F2F,
U have been reading them all along? Ah! Welcome officially anyways!


where have you learnt to pen the most complex emotions in a simple way . teach me

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