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Ripe time

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Monday, September 04, 2006 in
She ran as fast as her legs would carry her on the hot sun-burnt field. The rain starved coarse earth made ruthless marks on the pink sole of her soft feet. Her silver anklets and glass bangles clinked in rhythm as she sped. She cut across all those green and yellow grasses that had grown almost as tall as her, making her way to where her secret lay. The wind laden with the fresh aura of the greenery and fertility caressed her soft face and lifted her long plait a few feet behind her waist. The lofty side curls bounced against the side of her face as she reduced her momentum and halted to an abrupt stop near the third scare crow from the right.
She bent over to its side and leaned over to check for any suspicious eyes. None. She opened the hay stuffed bag by the side and delved her hand deep inside to retrieve the letter her beloved had sent.After reading the scrawled handwriting for the nth time, she ran towards the muddy road and waited for the lone bus to arrive, of course late as usual.
The day had finally arrived. Her love was coming back !

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17 Comments


barathiraja padam opening scene paathhuttu kadhai ezhudhitteengalaa?


"She opened the hay stuffed bag by the side and delved her hand deep inside "

I thought she was gonna take a beedi from her bag and have a thirutu dum ;) Pipe time.

Nice one.

Anonymous says:

slighta orey the doubt, how did the letter reach the hay bag???


same doubt as raised by manoj...
just b4 u wrote this, bharathi raaja padam paathiyaa??

BTW, "Manoj" raising this qn about bharathi raja.. nice coincidence, illa?


If u dont know, manoj is the name of Bharathi raja's son! :D


First time here... Just read "Twist". It was indeed a twist!! All along I was imagining the guy to be lying on a bed, spending his last minutes on earth!! I guess that is what you wanted the readers to think...

Good one...


Manoj,
Sathyama illa ! :)

Sathish,
????

Somu,
Dum ah? Cha cha ! Nalla ponnu iva!

Sagaro,
the "she" thaan vechurpa, keattu vena solren

Aravind,
same reply, bharathiraja padam laam paakala naa.

Hari,
Welcome here! And thanks :)


very nice..i liked the title-ripe time:)


yea yea naan ketka vendiya kelvi ya manoj anna kettutaaru... enakku intha post padikkarache pinnadi gala gala gala nu bgm sound lam kettuchu..heroine rathi oru pachai colour thavani la gudu gudu nu odi varanga antha pachai pasel pulveli la.. kadseela bus kaga wait panra scene la oru shenoy onnu podarom

summa pineeta ramya.... adutha national award unakkuthan :)


Very well written di!!!! College cut pannitu over ah padam paakara nu theriyardhu!!!! Aunty ta maati kodukaraen iru!!! :P


Kiki,
Danke :)

RS,
Sathyama, bharathiraja already ipdi yosichutaaru nu enaku theriyama poachey!!

Preethi
Adi podi, coll a enaku 5 days leave vitturkaanga! :D


di! full lowe feelings in life.. y??? yany new developments?


LOL!!! Ramyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! % days leave ahhhhhh.... Y di??? Y tellin me all this... me into peelings now!!!

BTW, i agree with Boss!!! Whacht is it???


dhoda very old style, nowadays there is something called email and SMS :)


Boss,
Adi paavi! Too much, strictly fictional nu oru warning podanum polarku!!

Prtihz,
U too? Idhu enna vambaa poachu? No peelings pliss echoose.

Kausik,
Idhu old ishtory

Anonymous says:

The day had finally arrived. Her love was coming back !

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