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Fusion of Love

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Sunday, February 15, 2009 in , , ,

She was warped.
He was impartial.

She chose whims.
He insisted on rationale.

She lived jauntily.
He kept constant vigilance.

She bubbled enthusiasm.
His feet never left the ground.

She longed for a fairy tale life.
He lived the moment.

She dreamed.
He made them true.

She always fret.
He always listened.

She initiated.
He completed.

She said I love you!
He said I do too!

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14 Comments


he he he... same happ to me..

i said happy valentine..
he said to u too..

i know its lame,
and its not i to blame
he he he


Blasphemy. the ram sena is gona get you :P.
seriously though liked it very much especially :
"She dreamed.
He made them true."


That was very very sweet.


joooper...loved the way the poem traversed...

Guna kamal maathiri solrathuna ... kavithai..kavithai :)

last two lines cud hav been more polished though...


First time here from Pri...

nice one... liked it :)

have a nice day.. cheers...


That was very nice... Told the story of perfect pair :)


The Rat,
Lol ! Good for you! :D

Kausik,
I support the pink chaddi campaign! Thanks anyway:D :D

Priya,
Thanks a lot! :)


RS,
Thank you!! The beauty of the last 2 lines can only be felt, never read and understood enough I think!

Arv,
Welcome to Somethings & Nothings!
Glad you liked it.

CM-Chap,
Thank you! But that's the story of a couple with their own differences yet accepting each other.

Anonymous says:

really cute! wanted to say that, thats y i made you change your comments settings :D


@PN,
Thanks boss!


Yup, to me thats wat the perfect pair is all about... To coexist with the differences. No couple in the world agree on evrything :)


CM-Chap,
That's true. . Living with the differences and accepting them gracefully is what makes them perfect.

Vani,
Thanks! :)


:) your reply to my comment was much more cute than your poem itself...

agreed.......... :)

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