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Love at First Sight

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Monday, October 15, 2007 in ,
To Priyya, Mahesh and their 21 day old angel, Nanditha !

When he first saw her, he couldn't take his eyes off her. His voice was caught in his throat. He was sure, one blink, and his watery eyes wouldn't hold their joyful tears for long.
Her head was jutting out of a white cloth that tightly secured her arms and legs leaving her completely immobile. Bluish green veins were visible on her flushed rosy cheeks. He touched her soft hair that reached the nape of her neck already and gingerly brushed them away from her forehead with his fingers. Carefully, he traced his finger down her tender cheek. She responded reflexively by craning her neck towards the finger, enjoying the tingly warmth of her father's touch.
Merely due to the loss of words and the inability to utter something sensible at that moment, he said in a hushed baritone - "Hello". She merely blinked at him. He found himself staring at another pair of the same black doe shaped eyes which had attracted him to his wife.
He gently picked her up. With one hand firmly supporting her neck and head, he ensconced her meanwhile adjusting her wrap. After cradling her in his arms for a while, he carefully placed her on his shoulders and patted her back. She gave a burp and rubbed her cheeks on his freshly laundered white Giordano t shirt. A few paces and some out-of-tune humming later, his first born was asleep. Very unwillingly he placed her in the cradle and sat beside it looking at his daughter sleep for the first time. A few minutes later, her tiny grayish pink lips curved lopsidedly, which he assumed to be a grin. Her first dream, he thought. He wondered as to what could be amusing her so much on her very first night in the world. He whispered -"I'm going to make every dream of yours come true, my love."
"So, will you change your opinion at least now?" asked his wife, stirring from her semi-conscious state.
He grinned sheepishly and held the hand of his first love who had brought about this little angel into their lives and changed both their lives forever.
"If you had to give me such an example to prove that Love at first sight does happen, then, I bow, you win !"

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16 Comments


hey lovelyyyy one romie... beautifully written....can visualize it as i read this....

soooooper..welcome back to blog


me too feeling the same as RS.. ur words bring the scene right before our eyes!!!
luvly!


nicely written post.


Beautiful as usual.

He found himself staring at another pair of the same black doe shaped eyes which had attracted him to his wife.

Loved these lines.


Reality is pretty close to what you wrote. But the "attraction to the wife" is slightly over-u. Nanditha says hi to her favorite sister.

Mahesh


aaha..... ohoo..... besh besh.....


Wow!
this is a sweet post... wonderfully crafted.... a nice dedication...
oru chinna thought...:)
I guess the love would have grown in them... as the kid took shape...before it came into the world.. right? ;)
so is this love @ first sight? :)


and yes...@Mahesh...
Congrats..


Achoooo!!! So damn artistic di rumz!

Loved ur description of the baby. And yeah, that 'hello' from the father - Ultimate! Semma cute! :D


sema cute!

that baby smiling is due to one, Ganesh (ada namma pullayar dhaan) nu solluvaanga.

Beautiful desci.


hey Ramya

That was beautifully written.... could almost imagine the scene playing in front of my eyes..

loved these lines-
"He found himself staring at another pair of the same black doe shaped eyes which had attracted him to his wife.
He gently picked her up. With one hand firmly supporting her neck and head, he ensconced her meanwhile adjusting her wrap."..

thanks for coming by my diary...:)


u have to try ur luck writing short stories & compile it in a book!

its amazing!



ammu.


Beautiful..God is captured in the eyes of the innocent baby..well done
TC
CU

Anonymous says:

Love at first sight works with only 2 , books and babies, and both have the tendency to stay in our minds and hearts forever. Well etched post! :)


Lovely sight, feeling what it was truly happening before.

Well written Ramya :)


Im left speechless...awesome is the word...mmm...Im seriously beginin to enjoy this ride down ur blogspot :)

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