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Freshly Brewed Love

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Tuesday, October 30, 2007 in ,
Thin rays of golden yellow sunlight peeped in from between the tightly pulled blinds. Abstract patterns danced on the bed as the curtains swayed in the autumn breeze. He turned over in his slumber trying to evade the sunlight and groped for his wife with one hand. On encountering a bunch of linen instead of his newly-wed, he propped himself on one elbow and glanced around the room. The digital clock blinked 7.40 am on the bedside table. Finding no signs of her presence, he craned his neck to check for lights from the gap beneath the washroom door. It took him a whole minute to acknowledge the aroma of coffee drifting through the bedroom door and the low notes of instrumental music emanating from the living room.

She pulled aside the curtains and let the bright sunlight caress her face. Taking in the warmth for a while, she switched on the radio and plopped herself on the overstuffed sofa. The mug of freshly brewed coffee was placed next to her on the table. And beside the mug, a very ornate frame held the photo of two people grinning broadly at the camera. She picked up the frame and smiled to herself. It was hard for her to believe that she was now living with the man whom she had loved all her life! She pinched herself hard to confirm reality. Hearing a muffled chuckle, she looked up to see the man in the photograph leaning casually against the frame of the bedroom door, smiling at her.

He knew that she was happy. The radiant look on her face, deep dimples on her cheeks and the way her eyes sparkled conveyed more to him than words could express. His protective arms around her said millions about how much he cared for her. Taking her mehndi adorned hands in his and looking straight into her deep dark eyes, he said in the most honest of tones, what she had felt shy to utter all her life - "I love you".

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16 Comments


I stumbled upon this blog recently.

I somehow feel you and Prithz sound very similar. (High Percentage of story pattern matching)

Nice one. I liked it !!!


Wow... chance se ille.. beautiful description...u made this simple moment...look awfully wonderful...nice phrasings...
loved it!


the way u describe the scene in detail is awesome...coming of age eh.... Keep it up :)

hey matured writing all ok... once in a while why not write some innocent tales, child like writing...... :)


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Nice writeup and you have your own style to make it wondrful.


summa nachchunu irundhuchu! :)


aha.. semme feelings!!!

really good.

deepavali wishes in advance!



ammu-in-deepavali-mood


Can i hv some of that freshly brewed love?

Keshi.


Short and very sweet!


Awwwwwww!!! Mushy mushy :D

Loved the title! :)


Inspiration frm sandra brown huh? romba romantic novels paduchutom pola...tel me u r goin to become one!lolz.. i wil b d first one to buy ur novel..!! haha..
good one but :)


The coffee romance - bliss :)


Excellent narration, well done


Hi Ramya,

I jus happnd to drop by your blog. Got to know it thro' Sarago's blog. I luv ur style. And this one on "Freshly Brewed Love", no exaggeration intended, but frankly, it is one of the best original contents I've read. I read a lotta classical literature and theatre works. Keep the interesting stuff goin on, and hope to see the same style in u in ur future posts too. You may wish to check out my blog. Help me grow mine, I ve added you to my favorites. Gimme some tips to make mine better. Add me too to your "park" :)

Praveen Chandar

http://candorcorner.blogspot.com


!cool! Is this magic or what? Slice-of-time stories have always been my favorite..for they resemble life more closely...no fixed starts and ends...just phases fading into each other.some moments and time slices are the only things that are worth writin home abt.

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