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Unadulterated Love

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Sunday, September 02, 2007 in ,
It was just another day in June. But the heat was not showing any signs of abatement. Dressed casually in a comfortable t shirt and a pair of jeans that badly needed washing, a pair of running shoes that had seen better days and a completely worn out Ferrari cap, Nimesh looked nothing more pompous than the boy next door.

The traffic was not improving things either. He braked, accelerated, braked again, changed lanes only to find the one he left to be less congested. After driving at snail's pace for what seemed like eons, the signal came. He adjusted the cap on his head as if pulling it further down his forehead would shield him from the blazing sun. Popping his knuckles, he gave a furtive glance at the rear view mirror.

Niranjana was a girl who didn't know much about the outside world. Her world comprised only of Nimesh and sitting on the pillion behind him today, made her feel as if there was nothing more she could want from life. She just wished, he would keep going and the ride never stop. She didn't care about the sun that was tanning her fair unblemished skin. She didn't care about the traffic, the end of which would in result her early separation from him. He was her guardian angel and she wanted him to be around forever.

The signal blinked to green, and Nimesh sped towards their destination for the day. Exactly 3 minutes later, he parked his bike in front of the building and she gingerly disembarked from the pillion. With tears brimming in her eyes, he half-carried her till the gate and saw his baby sister walk in to her first primary school. Now he had to go and hunt for a present to give her later in the evening when his arm would be wound with the sacred thread of Rakhi. He was a proud brother !

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27 Comments


unexpected twist. nice!



ammu.


visiting blogs after a long time... very good short story... really liked the twist, rumz... and, I always lov the way u describe the scene - apdiye kann munnadi kondu vandhu niruthiduvae :P !!


haiyyya..... title paarthavudane ithu raksha bandhan love related nu guess pannitene :p

but yea, i have to accept, after reading the 1st para, i changed my opinion :D


first as i was reading, i thought this was just a ok story :), but end paarthuttu once again padichappa, it really was a loving story romie :) Started well, progressed good and You rocked towards the end.....

characters name cud have been better though :D...also Romie punch is missing :)


neat story ..


Awww! Naice naice! Initially, u made me wonder wat's with a valentine day post now... until i read the last para!

Good one di! :)


loved it!

Keshi.


Super duper!!


the same old twist...

Anonymous says:

will this work?!!..wat do ya say..its viral,its abt the the mega shIT Symposia of 2K7. Converita is scheduled to be held on this 20th of September 2007.its here ,here and here too.bye.


hehehe oru technical flaw kandupidichittene :)


>>It was just another day in June.

romie akka....entha varusham raksha bandhan june maasam vanthirukku :D???


nice twist...way to go with ur damn good narration..:)


where is the new post u were talking about? :(


unadulterated love.. that relieved the plot for me even before last line. options were-- bro n siz or mom n son...;)


Just now read RS's blog and read ur post again (I actually forgot reading this post)... me the ore feelings....azhugaachiya varuthu...

posted a new post in my blog after a long time


Ada cha.. Rsubras flicked my thunder.. Anyway, cool story, the twist notwithstanding.. :D


lovely end..unexpected climax...
cheers ...


Great abstract writing .. :)


Hi ramya,

your writings are heart touching and true. Really good.

santhosh


Neat and Beuatiful story.


Well written! :)


un blog aluvudhu.. nee illama...


Hey Ramya

Came to your blog thru rsubras blog.. very cute story.. quite the twist at the end... nice..

Saw that ur also from chennai. am based here too..

do come over to mine wen u can..


one hitch i spotted was rakhi is not in june... :D


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your use of language is really good. i adore ur blog.


I luv the way you keep things short...n sweets. Gotta learn that skill, lest i keep writing knee length scroll-posts all my life.

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