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The Terminal

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Sunday, February 18, 2007 in
The time had arrived. She was there too among the huge gathering of people. The friends surrounding him were more in number than his family for he was a popular & lovable person amongst them. But for her, he meant something more than that. Everybody knew who she was, but not as much as he did. They had been together only for a month, but still it seemed as if they had spent their entire life together. But all that was insignificant now. What was more important was that, he was leaving her, why only her, he was leaving a whole bunch of his loved ones.
There were tears welling up in her eyes, but then he didn't want to see tears, not now. Mustering up the last of the resolute courage that was left within her, she put up a good battle against her own self. But then his eyes kept going back to her. She simply wanted to hug him tight and say that she would always be there for him. No! She couldn't do that. She got her answer from him soon. A smile and a bat of the eyelid, that said things more than words could have explained. That was all that he could manage and that was all she needed.
The moment had passed, the time had finally arrived........ the electronic voice on the loudspeaker cried out>>>
"All the passengers to the flight ***** are requested to proceed to the security check"
Final handshakes, hi-fives, pats on the back, hugs and soppy teary kisses and a final look at his sweetheart, he pushed his trolley and moved towards his new destination. A place totally new to him, a place void of his family, friends and of course his lovely sweetheart. Last minute handshakes were exchanged and she kept looking till he reached the point of no visibility.
Some wise soul once said - Time, tide and International flights wait for none. How true !

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35 Comments

Anonymous says:

Hi Ramya,

Nice post.

Sending someone off at the airport is a very hard thing. Especially when the person is one's beloved.

Voracious Blog Reader


indeed my child, indeed.. goodbye's are always painful.. international or domestic! :( how've u beeeeeeeen? im backkkk !! :D


I know and I can understand...Nicely written


Oh.. it's really painful...
the mood was brilliantly captured in ur short piece!!

lov ur stories... keep them coming, rumz!


thts posts captured those emotional moments in true light! Great work.

and Will pray for SHE to join soon with her sweetheart forever soon!


nicely written!

:)


=ammu=


Ramya, that was one great write-up!

//Time, tide and International flights wait for none.//

yeah, true true!

I initially thought, the girl was eloping with the boy... but was disappointed. :(

anyway.... nice one! :)


Came here via KK's blog.
Nice work. Enjoyed reading it.

//Time, tide and International flights wait for none.//
how very true..


Hey nicely written.... I was hoping for a twist like in Guru... Cha these movies are spoiling me :D
Very nice narration... Departures are always painful where ever that destination may be...


heyy ramya..thanks for dropping by...:D
great narration...liked the last line...it captured everything one could feel...
and those international flights...hate them :((...i wish those flights get cancelled everytime i go back from india...


Departure terminals r a tear-jerker. I hate em.

Keshi.


rumzieeeeee..... woww.. itz a hatrick :) Itz now 3 good posts in a row.... :).. Even though this plot has been dealt with so many times (most recently by prithz in her blog), u have brought out nicely and differently this one :) Just as the passage was about to get bored, u ended it with a sooper romie punch

>>Time, tide and International flights wait for none. How true


Voracious Blog Reader,
Thanks. It sure is hard!

S0ul,
Yaaaaaaayyy!!!!!! U're back !!!

Shiv,
Glad and thanks! :)


Aravind,
Danke smiley!!!

Nirek,
Thanks nirek! Am sure ur prayers will be heard! :)

Tulip,
Danke


Karthik BS,
hehehe, girl eloping would have made it more spicy ! Will try sometime later! :D Thanks again !

ArunKumar,
Welcome here ! :)
Thanks a lot !

KK,
U're watching too many movies!! And yes I hate departures too!


Mystery,
I think I should have posted just that line ! :D And yes welcome here :)

Keshi,
Dudette, back here after long? They sure are tear-jerkers! :D

RS,
This was one of my initial posts and the plot was dealt with the typical masala required ! :D

Anonymous says:

nice post..i somehow find railway stations more happier than airports..WEIRD..i know


bleddy, but for this one line "They had been together only for a month, but still it seemed as if they had spent their entire life together", everything is a ditto copy from my first trip to mumbai...plagiarism!! :D

super post btw!!

Anonymous says:

Hv I read this before or what ?


admire your writing skills..

and brighter side of the story -- its only flight, a call, a mail away

When tears fill your eyes,
And great sadness fills your heart,
When it is hard to say farewell,
To your friend as they go away.

Your fellowship with creator begins.

The clouds will clear away.
Rainbows will be bright again.
For your friends will keep you
In their prayers and thoughts.
When miles and ocean come in between.
When good and bad times come your way.
So keep on trying best you can.


cha.. was expecting a twisht.. like the time when Ross sends Marcel away..

maybe I shudn't expect doggies in every post of urs! :)

Anonymous says:

ok nw, this is not fair. you cant send me back like this everytime! we want new post! we want new post! :P


Krithika,
Defi railways are better ! Totally agree, there's something ironic about terminals! :D

Praveen,
I explained it to you! And ladies & gentlemen who read this blog, praveen is a liar and this piece of work was crafted 2 years back by me !


Ashes,
Refrain from commenting then! :D

Yuva,
I'm a sucker for verses. That was beautiful. I love the way how little words convey more meaning than long screeds ! Brilliant ! :)

Harish,
hehehe, i couldn't find a dog at the terminal ! :D

S0ul,
Coming up over the weekend ! Hang on !


kandippa try pannanum! :)

aprom eppadi irukka?


oorukku poittu ippo thaan 2 weeks munnaadi vanthurukken.... ippo ippdi oru post pottu enna peelings aakkittiye!!


That was awesome! Great writing :) I truly enjoyed reading.. Keep them coming,..


Karthik BS,
Kandippa try panren ! :D :D
Naa supera iruken, u how ? Btw, unna madiri naa comment box a laam chat box aa use panradhu illa. :D

Smallwall,
Jaari, raang number!

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman
Thank you and welcome here :)


ada paavi!! figure kazhati vitutu foregin porana?

Anonymous says:

Time, tide and International flights wait for none

Two questions

--What abt domestic flights?

--What if the pilot doesn't turn up till the time of departure?


@Kausik,
Aama, party escape !

Sheks,
U ask too many kosteens !


hmm..interesting post..saw a similar one in prithz's post..may be alvida's are flavor of blogsville this month :D first time here..mistook urs for the other ramya's post :D inimay regulara visitida vendi than :d i liked the evangelist post also.. :)


Come here via "Like flight landed in another destination" but after landing i feel happy !
Hey nicely written....The post captured emotional touch in a heart

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