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See to feel

Posted by Ramya Shankar on Monday, January 15, 2007 in
She gently held the cup of strong coffee with her fingers and sat on the chair beside the window and looked out. A gentle zephyr blew the hair out of fair and she rattled a little feeling the chillness creep down her body. She drew her knees close to her body in response and took a sip of the bitter coffee enjoying its ubiquitous aroma.
She saw kids playing with a stray pup that tried to yelp and wriggle out of the plump boy's fingers, but he seemed to be having a tight grip. She empathized with the pup. She looked beyond, an old couple were holding hands and trying to cross the road. She saw love in their grasp. A smile escaped her lips and a sip of the coffee spread warmth into her system. She gazed leftwards and spotted the vegetable vendor pushing his cart. She saw desperation in his eyes to sell the last of his tomatoes, potatoes, cabbages and capsicums.
She saw watchmen with scarves and monkey caps around their heads strutting about the apartments chasing the annoying salesmen away from the gates. Another sip burnt her insides. She saw young lads on bicycles being weighed down by the weight of their backpacks. The sweat of perseverance and tiredness. The cup was empty atlast.
She imagined the vehicles honk and roll past, the birds chirp, the kids screaming in delight, the vegetable vendor's voice, the rhythmic sound of the rustic cycle chains, the quarrel between the watchman and the sales rep and a lot more of the unheard voices in the moribund city life.
Life is so different when you have to imagine the sounds of life and don't possess the hearing perception.


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23 Comments


nice one dear - have u considered a career in writing? ;)

inniya ponggal vazhtukal ramya ;)


Oh,pretty description of the sights!!:) That old couple just stole my heart!:P

Anonymous says:

I think u're posting fiction after very long ! Me likes it !
Back with a bang I suppose?


quite picturesque i have to say!! accurate and everyday happenings. just one thing though!
watchmen with scarves and monkey caps! lol. they take it off in the morning, i presume, and sales reps who visit that early in the morning must be mad because everyone will be busy doing something, they cant bother people at the time!! their product is surely not going to be bought! lol.


Happy Pongal to you too. Good writeup..


life could be great if you are deaf, you get to do what you want and need not give a damn about what others say :|


Hope you would have had a great Pongal...
I liked the way you finished it...
//Life is so different when you have to imagine the sounds of life and don't possess the hearing perception.//
Awesome :) Keep writing :)


loved this one!!

The descriptions were so good, and so was the ending!


wow!! awesome post! good job, ramya :)


simply awseome post!


last'la oru gunda thooki poteenga paatheengala.... adhu!


completely unexpected that was!


Cool post di rumz!

People deprived of one sense organ, make use of the rest so much better than those blessed wid all. U portrayed that well :)


Visit,
Career in writing? Let me finish this goddamn engineering first.
And happy pongal to u too ! The pics were gr8 as usual ! :)

Juggernought,
And did anything else steal the remnants??

Ashes,
Yes, long indeed. U likes? Me glads! :D


VBK,
This is at twilight when salesmen are pushing those useless things across. :D

Priya,
Thanks, wish u the same :)

Kausik,
Absolutely !


KK,
Thanks! I had a good pongal, how was yours? :)

Raman India, Amritsar,
Thank you and welcome here! You're most permissible to link me back!

Aravind,
Thanks a lot :)


F2F,
Thanks yekkow ! And bubbles? Powerpuff partner ? :D

Karthik BS,
Nandri nandri! Adhu enna neenga vaanga?? Mariyadaya? Irukatum, nadakatum! :D

Pree,
Thanks di ! Padippula moozhgitiya ?


gud one!..u hav written very well


u know Ramya sometimes I wish I was deaf...cos ppl can be really rotten with words!

Keshi.


Good one rumzz.... :)


Lovely narration..enjoyed every line :)
Keep writing!!


Was sinking last week.. this week drowned :D

Anonymous says:

and for people like myself out here in chicago, we dont even have the luck to see such!! :( me is homesick! :(


Kiki,
Thanks a lot kiki :)

Keshi,
Be careful what u wish for! I know being deaf could be an advantage with the specimens around us.

RS,
I defi didn't expect this small a comment! :D

Marutham,
Glad u liked it ! :)

Pree,
En ma? Enna aachu ? Ping me sometime when free.

S0ul,
Ouch! I know how morose things could get. You're there for the betterment of your life ! Things are gonna be just great! Take it easy policy! :D

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